Tuesday, February 5, 2013

A part from my short story (still first draft)

Setup: Eric McCalin, a Elf detective (freelance) is asked to meet an employer at a bar for details about the job.
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The Black Card Bar had a reputation for being a place of numbers and as such it could afford to keep the neon lights lit. The outside of the bar had five giant black-light backlit cards, four aces and one plain black. It was the most professional place in this part of town. Inside was smoky, dark, and sparsely populated with people that either had their face in their drinks or cards. People were ether depressed or were betting that they would be by days end.
Eric strode toward the bar at a careful pace, he couldn’t be sure if anyone wasn’t packing and twitchy. Though he could be sure that almost everyone was packing. The bartender was ogre in croupier outfit, the white undershirt was suffering from overuse, and the vest was frayed at the sleeves. The ogre seemed to be continually scanning the room, “Need something Elf?” he grunted, nodding towards Eric without looking.
“A whiskey,” Eric looked toward the entry to the backroom. “I’m meeting Mr. Johnson.”
“Should you really be saying that aloud?” the ogre filled a glass and slid it in front of Eric, still not looking at him.
Eric shrugged, “It’s not like this thing doesn’t happen often enough.” The ogre nodded, “What can you tell me about the one I’m meeting?”
“He’s here already… ordered a glass of my finest, pale, and pointy-eared...” The ogre looked at Eric “…sorry…”
            Eric was in mid-sip. “It’s whatever.” He set his drink down, “Male albino elf with a taste for the expensive… is he a prick?”
            “Aren’t they always?” the ogre smiled a little. “He has a couple dwarves with him, probably protection.” Eric nodded and slipped the bartender an extra ten nuyen. The hall to the back room was ill lit; the smoke from the rest of the bar seemed to gather thicker turning the lights to a dim diffuse glow. Eric pushed the thick wooden door lightly. It opened as he peered in seeing a pale elf in a suit and shades. Flanked by dwarves in trench coats holding shotguns firmly in both hands also with shades.
            “Mr. McCalin?” the voice was soft.
            “Yes, I am a Mr. McCalin. Called here for a meet.” He sat in the chair across the table form the elf. “Are you my Mr. Johnson?”
            “I don’t remember giving a name during my call.” The elf’s voice seemed irritated but, also, shaky?
            Eric rubbed his temples, the dwarves looked at each other. “So you are my Mr. Johnson, which is what runners call their employers who don’t like to give their names.” Eric rolled his eyes. “So, why did you call me? Mr. Johnson.”
            The Elf frowned and fidgeted a bit, “ahem, yes, well… I have a job for a group of individuals…”
            “Runners.”
            “…Yes, Runners for a job and I need someone to help clear the way.”
            “They have guns for that don’t they?” Eric reached slowly for his cigarette subconsciously aware of the dwarves watching.
            “I need them to steal something, and I need them to be discrete about it.” Mr. Johnson obviously annoyed.
            “Of course you do,” Eric reached for Betsy, when the dwarves caught a glimpse of it the raised their guns. “Easy now boys, its just a lighter,” he pointed Betsy’s barrel at the end of the cigarette, held his thumb to the hammer to the trigger. The click caused Mr. Johnson to jump in his seat. Eric smiled, “Want one?”
            Mr. Johnson shook his head and lifted his hand. “I want you to clear the area they will be operating in.”
            “I’m not a Runner,”
            “You know people,”
            “Yes I do, so…” Eric took a drag, “So I burn through some goodwill and in return, get what?”
            “One grand.”
            Eric thought, “I suppose that’s fair. What building do you need cleared?”
            “Money Row.”
            Eric paused, “Money Row. Money Row? The financial district, Money Row?”
            “Yes.”
            “That’s more than a one grand job. A building is fine, or a block at a stretch, but the whole district? I’ll be burning through more than just a few favors for this.”
            “I’m not telling you what building it is or else you might sell them out, the district should be enough, but if payment is really the issue…” Mr. Johnson straightened his tie, “consider the grand up front, and another grand once the Runners are successful.”
Eric leaned back and examined Mr. Johnson. Besides the fact that this particular Mr. Johnson was new to this there was something else about him that was off. That and even if Mr. Johnson didn’t want to tell him what building that needed to be clear Eric could always find out. He knew people. He threw up his hands, “Fine, how do I contact you when it’s done?” Mr. Johnson leaned forward and put a playing card face down on the table. Eric took it and put in his inside coat pocket. “All…right…” Eric stood up, “If that’s all,” He nodded to the men. The dwarves nodded back, Mr. Johnson stared. “I’ll be off.”

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next week I'll have an avie or two done

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